Tuesday, 30 December 2014

the long snake


The snake was so long it reached 2 kilometers on each side of the Great Wall of China. The snake was so hungry it actually swallowed the Great Wall of China! Now he is as long as the Great Wall of China! He slept. That night soldiers from another country invaded china so all the children including babies had to hide. We hid in the snake and what we saw was the Great Wall of China. We tried pulling it out, pushing it out and bot pulling and pushing it out but it was so heavy. We tried and tried and tried and we got tired so we slept.

In the morning the snake had already devoured the Great Wall of China. We had nothing to do so I sent some of the bravest children to try and see where the Great Wall of China is. We waited for a few hours but they never came back so I pushed myself to go there. I asked the oldest child I could find to protect the children. He said “that’s fine.” So I set of to find the brave children who sacrificed themselves to find the Great Wall of China.

When I reached the snake’s belly there were chainsaws. Can you believe that! I mean chainsaws, well anyway I ran for it unluckily, a chainsaw was going to cut my head but luckily, another chainsaw hit the chainsaw and it bounced of hitting the floor (snake’s belly). And I ran to the next body part. I ran on stairs and 1 hour later I was still running up some stairs until I came to a room with letters on the floor. I saw a few holes. Then I heard a speaker saying “spell antidisestablishmentarianism.” I’m no good at spelling so I cheated by looking up in the dictionary in my phone. I spelled it out loud…. A N T I D I S E S T A B L I S H M E N T A R I A N I S M. The speaker said “good so now you have to spell it on the floor”…; I came to a different room where I saw the Great Wall of China. Then this claw came and took it out where it belonged and when the other country saw it, they ran away like there was an alien invasion. That night we celebrated!

1 comment:

  1. That's an awesome story, Kerubim! I did enjoy reading it and you know what?! I felt like I was in the story as one of the villagers who scared of the snake to eat me.

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